I am enjoying this so much. You have Danny spot on and his POV is brilliant. Love how he is fighting his feelings so much yet Rachel can figure it out cause she has known him so long. Really liked the drunk Steve and Danno taking care of him until he has to leave because he is just to turned on and oh how hot the image you gave by describing just before he left, his drive home and then his falling against the wall to get rid of being hard and how he hadn't felt that desperation in years about getting rid of his hard on. That was so good.
I'm also thinking that it's not a oneway street and never has been but that Danny was into Steve and saw his feelings before Steve starts getting a bit needy for Danny to be around. And as Danny says Steve doesn't like to show feelings and is probably pushing them down but they are coming up more now that Danny has been staying there. Him asking and making an excuse to bring Grace over for the weekend I think is the beginning of not being able to push the feelings down anymore.
This is such a fantastic story. Just love how you are writing it so that it's working it's way to them and not just starting them out as a couple.....And Gracie is always so cute in how she loves her Danno but now she loves Steve too.....This to me is hot torture reading Danny's mind...lol...
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I'm also thinking that it's not a oneway street and never has been but that Danny was into Steve and saw his feelings before Steve starts getting a bit needy for Danny to be around. And as Danny says Steve doesn't like to show feelings and is probably pushing them down but they are coming up more now that Danny has been staying there. Him asking and making an excuse to bring Grace over for the weekend I think is the beginning of not being able to push the feelings down anymore.
This is such a fantastic story. Just love how you are writing it so that it's working it's way to them and not just starting them out as a couple.....And Gracie is always so cute in how she loves her Danno but now she loves Steve too.....This to me is hot torture reading Danny's mind...lol...