gyzym: (Danny (the face that goes with the tone))
gyzym ([personal profile] gyzym) wrote2011-03-22 03:06 am

brought to you by the letter i [have a self control problem]

Left computer downstairs in attempt to sleep; wrote post-ep on phone instead. Insanity offical, send help.

"Housebreaker," Steve says, and shuts the door. Danny looks up at him from the couch, down to his boxers and nursing a beer, and sighs.

"Funny thing, McGarrett," he says, "but when you date a lunatic, it is prudent, okay, it is wise, to learn the signs of an impending breakdown. I am an officer of the law and you, my friend, are a danger to yourself and others, and that message you left me? Yeah, it was not so much with the sanity. And actually, we need to talk about that anyway, because my voicemail is not the place for your freakish note-to-self debriefing bullshit, capiche? Would it have killed you to use a full sentence, that's all I'm asking, we're gonna have to get you a tape recorder or something--"

"You come here to yell at me or fuck me?"

"You're a real sweetheart, you know that?" Danny says, but when Steve takes his arm and drags him toward the stairs, he goes.

They fuck raw, sick-close and dangerous, leaving bruises like war wounds across each others' skin. Steve's a high wire act, scrabbling for a soft land in Danny's hardest places, and Danny lets him have it; he tucks into Steve's bared throat, his half-whines threaded gossamer thin between Steve's grunts. It's a stupid, fucked-up thing to do, to touch where he should talk, to distract instead of focus. Then again, Steve's a stupid, fucked up guy, guiding strangers into chaos, sleeping in the house his parents built.

"Goddamn," Danny breathes, when Steve comes without meaning to, too soon and too hard, "have a little courtesy, c'mon, you gonna blueball me after I dragged myself all this way?" Steve sucks him dry in recompense, making him writhe against the sheets, cataloguing every filthy word he chokes around to keep from thinking anything else.

"Your next tattoo," Danny says, when they're sticky between the sheets, sweat-stained and through with each other. "It's gonna say 'My life is not an action movie,' we're gonna put it on your fucking forehead."

"That's cute, Danno," Steve says. Danny bites him on the shoulder too hard to be pleasant, and Steve breathes in the comfort of that, of Danny's sawed-rough human touch, long after he closes his eyes.


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[identity profile] seeingrightly.livejournal.com 2011-03-22 07:27 am (UTC)(link)
Okay thank you for making Danny use capiche because I don't fucking know why it isn't canon yet, I mean seriously, seriously, why the fuck wouldn't he.

But anyway:

his half-whines threaded gossamer thin between Steve's grunts

Yes.

Danny's sawed-rough human touch

So much yes.

[identity profile] gyzym.livejournal.com 2011-03-22 11:53 pm (UTC)(link)
WHERE IS THE CAPICHE, I ASK YOU.

So glad you enjoyed this, bb ♥
ext_559841: suspended on silver wings~ (Scotty Bedhair)

[identity profile] shiroi-ten.livejournal.com 2011-03-22 07:35 am (UTC)(link)
I took a shower at 12, I can't say anything to anyone about...getting things done.

A soft land in Danny's hardest places. *sighs with happiness*

Go to sleep soon!

[identity profile] gyzym.livejournal.com 2011-03-22 11:54 pm (UTC)(link)
I went to sleep IMMEDIATELY AFTER HITTING POST, actually, but thank you so much for this comment, I'm so glad you liked this :D

[identity profile] fic-kitty.livejournal.com 2011-03-22 07:45 am (UTC)(link)
What is with you and the hot sex today! Not that I'm complaining! I WOULD NEVER COMPLAIN ABOUT HOT SEX.

NNf.

[identity profile] gyzym.livejournal.com 2011-03-22 11:54 pm (UTC)(link)
SOMETIMES I JUST FEEL LIKE WRITING SEX, IDEK. Thank so much, bb!

[identity profile] gehirnstuerm.livejournal.com 2011-03-22 07:45 am (UTC)(link)
alsfhjsdkashfsaak!!1!

What are you doing to me? I need to get things done today! It's not even 9 AM over here and I'm already useless!

[identity profile] gyzym.livejournal.com 2011-03-23 12:02 am (UTC)(link)
I am sorry to have made you useless, but so glad you enjoyed it!! Thanks so much ♥

[identity profile] theonlytwin.livejournal.com 2011-03-22 08:48 am (UTC)(link)
Insanity offical, send help.

um, no.

[identity profile] gyzym.livejournal.com 2011-03-23 12:03 am (UTC)(link)
BUT I NEED THE HELP D:

[identity profile] illian.livejournal.com 2011-03-23 03:03 am (UTC)(link)
For what? To writhe more?

Write! I MEANT WRITE!

*lets the typo stand*
Edited 2011-03-23 03:04 (UTC)

[identity profile] theonlytwin.livejournal.com 2011-03-23 04:32 am (UTC)(link)
we need the awesome porn. LIFE IS FULL OF TOUGH DECISIONS.

[identity profile] futureperfect.livejournal.com 2011-03-22 09:04 am (UTC)(link)
OH GOD THESE TWO.

[identity profile] gyzym.livejournal.com 2011-03-23 12:03 am (UTC)(link)
THEY ARE KIND OF A MESS, BUT WE LOVE THEM ANYWAY :D

[identity profile] robanybody.livejournal.com 2011-03-22 09:42 am (UTC)(link)
YES TO ALL OF THIS. I may be making heart-eyes over all your dialogue. ♥

[identity profile] gyzym.livejournal.com 2011-03-23 12:03 am (UTC)(link)
kfhdjhs I MAKE HEART EYES OVER YOUR DIALOGUE ON THE REGULAR, SO ♥
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[identity profile] lamardeuse.livejournal.com 2011-03-22 09:58 am (UTC)(link)
Oh my goodness. Yes.

[identity profile] gyzym.livejournal.com 2011-03-23 12:03 am (UTC)(link)
♥ ♥ ♥

[identity profile] abbichicken.livejournal.com 2011-03-22 10:08 am (UTC)(link)

Yeah, that fits in perfectly with just having finished watching the ep. Much enjoyed, cheers XD

[identity profile] gyzym.livejournal.com 2011-03-23 12:04 am (UTC)(link)
Thanks so much! Glad you enjoyed it :D

[identity profile] sirona-gs.livejournal.com 2011-03-22 11:22 am (UTC)(link)
JIZZY, JIZZY I LOVE YOU. We needed this, just as much as we needed the coda after 1.18. Oh god, poor Steve. I'm kinda looking forward to seeing Danny's reaction when he realises just what's going on with Agent Kaye that Steve isn't telling him/them about! Because that shit would be epic. He's totally gonna blow his top, I reckon.

[identity profile] gyzym.livejournal.com 2011-03-23 12:04 am (UTC)(link)
I can't wait to see where this whole arc is going, personally :D Thanks so much!

[identity profile] dogeared.livejournal.com 2011-03-22 11:38 am (UTC)(link)
Steve's a high wire act, scrabbling for a soft land in Danny's hardest places ♥ ♥ ♥

(Okay, and now I have continued to have this rolling around in my brain, and I wonder if it's not the opposite, too—that Steve lands hard in all of Danny's soft places, and Danny can take it, and that's how they fit.)
Edited 2011-03-22 16:36 (UTC)

[identity profile] gyzym.livejournal.com 2011-03-23 12:08 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, god--because they're a study in crash landings, right, aren't they? Casting off little shrapnel bits of each other that dig in and embed, until Steve can't remember whose speech pattern this was first and Danny smells like his shirts. And all the time there's the echo of their back-and-forth, of these little explosions they make when they meet each other in the darkness, the irreversible trajectories of their pasts and presents drawing them together and apart.

And Danny says, "Do you have to know every little thing about my life," but he means why do I let you do this, and Steve looks at him and doesn't know himself.

[identity profile] hermette.livejournal.com 2011-03-22 11:53 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, babe.

♥_♥

[identity profile] gyzym.livejournal.com 2011-03-23 12:09 am (UTC)(link)
I FEEL LIKE I HAVEN'T TALKED TO YOU IN A YEAR EVEN THOUGH IT'S BEEN LESS THAN 24 HOURS WHAT HAVE YOU DONE TO ME

[identity profile] hermette.livejournal.com 2011-03-23 12:17 am (UTC)(link)
SORRY I'M SORRY.

[identity profile] missimae2u.livejournal.com 2011-03-22 02:03 pm (UTC)(link)
"You come here to yell at me or fuck me?"

oh steve he can do both silly man........lolz....

luv this! wonderful! so hot!

[identity profile] gyzym.livejournal.com 2011-03-23 12:09 am (UTC)(link)
Thanks so much!

[identity profile] padfootthegrim.livejournal.com 2011-03-22 02:12 pm (UTC)(link)
Your writing, it leaves me speechless. For real.

Steve's a high wire act, scrabbling for a soft land in Danny's hardest places
and
his half-whines threaded gossamer thin between Steve's grunts.
and
Danny bites him on the shoulder too hard to be pleasant, and Steve breathes in the comfort of that, of Danny's sawed-rough human touch

Seriously, I cannot even. THIS. ♥

[identity profile] gyzym.livejournal.com 2011-03-23 12:10 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you so so so much oh my god ♥

[identity profile] sheafrotherdon.livejournal.com 2011-03-22 02:19 pm (UTC)(link)
askdjhflasdf I love this, love Steve wound so tight and Danny almost angry at him for it, but they can't keep away from each other, need each other desperately, still. asjdhflakh :D

[identity profile] gyzym.livejournal.com 2011-03-23 12:10 am (UTC)(link)
♥ ♥ ♥ !

[identity profile] jtsbbsps-dk.livejournal.com 2011-03-22 03:13 pm (UTC)(link)
My life is not an action movie THAT IS SO PERFECT!

OH STEVE!!!

[identity profile] gyzym.livejournal.com 2011-03-23 12:10 am (UTC)(link)
♥!

[identity profile] viennajones.livejournal.com 2011-03-22 04:05 pm (UTC)(link)
♥ I love them so much. And I love your writing just as much! jlkjkjhdfakjsfdhaksdf.

[identity profile] gyzym.livejournal.com 2011-03-23 12:11 am (UTC)(link)
Eeep, thank you so much!

[identity profile] alamo-girl80.livejournal.com 2011-03-22 05:18 pm (UTC)(link)
So when is the "Danny gets sexting lessons to give Steve unfortunate hard-ons at unfortunate times" - fic coming?

:-D

[identity profile] gyzym.livejournal.com 2011-03-23 12:12 am (UTC)(link)
jdsjfdjsf I THINK I WOULD END UP WRITING ONE WHERE DANNY SEXTS POORLY AND DOES NOT GET LESSONS, AND STEVE IS TURNED ON ANYWAY /o\

[identity profile] alamo-girl80.livejournal.com 2011-03-23 01:39 am (UTC)(link)
DO IIIIT!!!!! Actually, I just want hot and bothered Steve and Danny kinda clueless if he's doing it right...

[identity profile] ladyoflisquill.livejournal.com 2011-03-22 11:04 pm (UTC)(link)
"Danny bites him on the shoulder too hard to be pleasant, and Steve breathes in the comfort of that, of Danny's sawed-rough human touch, long after he closes his eyes."

Jesus, omg, this is just... how can you write amazing shit like tis on a freakkin phone!

[identity profile] gyzym.livejournal.com 2011-03-23 12:15 am (UTC)(link)
TO BE FAIR IT IS AN IPHONE :D

Thank you so much, bb ♥

[identity profile] arineat.livejournal.com 2011-03-23 01:03 am (UTC)(link)
Capiche! YES! At least they had him use the word "schmuck" this ep. I've been waiting for "schmucks" as well. xD

They fuck raw, sick-close and dangerous, leaving bruises like war wounds across each others' skin. Steve's a high wire act, scrabbling for a soft land in Danny's hardest places, and Danny lets him have it; he tucks into Steve's bared throat, his half-whines threaded gossamer thin between Steve's grunts.