Date: 2008-08-19 03:04 am (UTC)
This was marvelous - the way you dealt with George's loss, and the stupid shitty (no pun intended) things he does about it, all felt very real - and likewise his slow realization (with proddings from Fred-in-his-subconscious) of what Lee means to him.

And as a Percy fan I liked how you showed him in the family and George's interactions with him, too: there aren't many things he knows about, but the guilt of surviving is one of them was spot-on.
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