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1. sdjfhjsdkfhdsjkfhsdjk jfdshfgjksdhfdshfgdsh you guys [livejournal.com profile] aphelant podficced two of my fics! She did i'll see you when the sun sets east (don't forget me), the Inception fic where Arthur & Eames are in limbo, and that H50 ficlet where Danny sleeps so hard he left a bruise, which I didn't title because I'm asshole. And she also did a truly magnificent rendition of [livejournal.com profile] weatherfront's You're Waiting for an Orgasm, and oh my god, you guys, dsjfhdsjkfhkds THEY ARE AMAZING, THEY ARE ALL SO AMAZING. I'm always just floored when someone wants to podfic my stuff, and these are just. I can't even, she did things with the effects in i'll see you when the sun sets east that are just, oh my god, so much better than the actual fic. AMAZEBALLS. A-MAZE-BALLS.

2. It's [livejournal.com profile] hermette's birthday for another 10 minutes (GETTING THIS IN UNDER THE WIRE YES I AM), and she is SO GOOD TO ME ALWAYS AND THE BEST EVER, so I wrote her a ficlet about Danny and Steve being stupid in love with each other in the morning. HAPPY BIRTHDAY BB. ALL OF MY LOVE. ♥

you're a beautiful and violent word

Danny wakes up alone and yawns, mumbles, rolls over. It's a big bed, strangely empty without the haphazard sprawl of Steve, and his fingers forge into the abandoned space, seeking fruitlessly. The sheets are still warm, a little, a lingering piece of him left behind. When Danny chances cracking an eye open it's just barely dawn, hints of sunlight filtering in through the drawn blinds. He blinks, once, twice, and stands up.

Steve's stairs are hard enough to navigate when fully awake, but half asleep they're dangerous. Danny braces himself against the wall and stumbles on, nearly tripping on the landing, catching another yawn against the back of his hand. He considers turning back, but it's not much further, and it's not like doesn't know where Steve will be. He's predictable this way, crawling out of bed at odd hours to do odd things--doubtless he's in the ocean or running a mile, and Danny likes to be up when he gets back. It's a push-and-pull thing, the way they are with each other, and it's less ridiculous that Steve can't rest if Danny doesn't either.

There's something to that, something sharp and stoic, something that's maybe a little warm and fuzzy in the right light. Danny's too tired to bother with it right now.

He makes it to the living room on willpower alone, muscle memory guiding him blindly towards the coffee. It's coincidence, a hint of instinct, that makes him glance outside--there's something shaped like Steve beached on the lanai, stretched out, dark hair contrasting smoothly with the pale expanse of sand. Danny redirects, slip outside, rubs the hard edges of sleep from his eyes, and Steve cranes his neck, slants him a sideways grin.

"Morning," he says, obviously exhausted still. There's a mug of coffee half-buried next to him, and Danny'd bet dollars to donuts there's sand in it; he'd bet Steve doesn't care, too, will drink it anyway, unbothered. That's just the kind of guy Steve is, unfazed by all the things that make normal people crazy, wandering off the beaten path like no one ever taught him to follow a trail.

And there's something to that too, isn't there, to Steve the errant traveler, always charting his own course. But for every stupid, fucked up choice he makes, there are these moments too, Steve sprawled out on the beach, rasping out a greeting, shielding his eyes against the coming sun. Danny's heart is too big for his chest, is too tight for this hour of the day.

"Morning," he says, instead of You big freak or What are you doing out here or Sometimes I love you so much it terrifies me, because you don't make any sense at all and you're clearly not sane and everything you do makes me wonder a little more what goes on in that head of yours, McGarrett, fuck. He rubs a hand against the back of his neck, yawns a third time, not bothering to cover it.

Steve's smile deepens, and he looks back towards the ocean, and it's Sunday, Danny's awake enough now to remember that. He could go upstairs and sleep for years, but he slides down to the ground anyway, rolls into Steve's stupid SEAL chest, rubs his cheek into the hollow space by his collarbone. Steve's got stubble, growing rough, that catches a little against Danny's eyebrow; Danny smiles into Steve's shirt, buries his fingers in the sand, and sighs.

"What was wrong with the bed," he manages, feeling sleep tugging at him already. "Too comfortable, huh?"

"Sunrise," Steve says. "Appreciating the little moments, Danno, it's a thing people do."

"Mmmm," Danny agrees, and there's definitely something to that, something he'll think about in an hour, two, when Steve shifts and dislodges him, makes him go inside.

Date: 2011-04-01 03:55 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bibliokat.livejournal.com
♥ ♥ ♥

Date: 2011-04-01 03:56 am (UTC)

Date: 2011-04-01 03:56 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hermette.livejournal.com
♥_♥

You're so, so good to me, bb. So good to me. <3

Date: 2011-04-01 03:57 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gyzym.livejournal.com
<3 <3 <3 <3 THAT IS BECAUSE I LOVE YOU. IN MY SOUL. BESCHERT, BB. ♥

Date: 2011-04-01 03:58 am (UTC)
andrealyn: (h50: blood samples)
From: [personal profile] andrealyn
It's all fuzzy and warm and perfeeeeect omg. ♥

Date: 2011-04-01 03:59 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fic-kitty.livejournal.com
o//

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)o)

|o|

\o/

Date: 2011-04-01 05:17 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gunslingaaahhh.livejournal.com
THIS IS THE BEST DANCE EVER.

Date: 2011-04-01 05:57 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fic-kitty.livejournal.com
IT IS MY HAPPIER THAN WORDS DANCE

Date: 2011-04-01 09:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gunslingaaahhh.livejournal.com
DO IT ALL THE TIME, I LIKE IT.

Date: 2011-04-01 10:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gunslingaaahhh.livejournal.com
OMG AND NOW ITS AN ICON I LOVE IT

Date: 2011-04-01 10:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fic-kitty.livejournal.com
WOULD YOU LIKE THE ICON YOU CAN HAS IT IF YOU LIKE.

Date: 2011-04-01 10:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gunslingaaahhh.livejournal.com
I JUST MIGHT TAKE YOU UP ON THAT

Date: 2011-04-01 04:05 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] esteefee.livejournal.com
oh, asdfa;lakd;kasdjlaksfaskdf! off the beaten path...I'm glad Danny's heart wandered there, too. ♥

Date: 2011-04-01 04:14 am (UTC)

Date: 2011-04-01 04:44 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] seeingrightly.livejournal.com
I can never get enough sleepyfic for these two. It's so warm. <3

Date: 2011-04-01 04:51 am (UTC)
ext_559841: suspended on silver wings~ (Scotty Bedhair)
From: [identity profile] shiroi-ten.livejournal.com
♥______________♥

Date: 2011-04-01 05:16 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gunslingaaahhh.livejournal.com
precious <3

and ok, im probably an idiot, but what is podfic?

Date: 2011-04-01 10:04 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] zolac-no-miko.livejournal.com
It's, like, fandom's answer to the audiobook. It's not something I've got personal experience with, but... like a podcast? People record read-alouds of fanfiction for you to listen to on your iPod or whatever. Or something.

Date: 2011-04-01 09:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gunslingaaahhh.livejournal.com
i seeeee ok, awesome haha. im so glad everyone came together to clear this up for me ;)

ps your icon? AMAZING. i fucking love batman <3

Date: 2011-04-02 12:55 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] zolac-no-miko.livejournal.com
BATMAN IS THE BEST, TRUFAX.

And Steve McGarrett is totally Batman. This whole Bruce Wayne thing is an elaborate subterfuge.

Date: 2011-04-02 12:57 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gunslingaaahhh.livejournal.com
YOU KNOW NOT WHAT YOU SAY. YOUR WORDS COULD SPARK AN UNFORTUNATE CROSSOVER WRITTEN BY YOURS TRULY AND I AM NOT UP FOR THAT RIGHT NOW.

BE GENTLE WITH ME.

Date: 2011-04-02 09:40 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] zolac-no-miko.livejournal.com
...YOU ARE EXPECTING ME NOT TO ENCOURAGE THIS COURSE OF ACTION, NOW?

DO IT. DOOOOOO IIIIIITTTTT. FOR THE GREATER GOOD.

I mean, I kind of already halfway went there, but a proper crossover would be DOUBLE PLUS EXCELLENT, OKAY.

...Doooo iiiitttt~

Date: 2011-04-03 01:12 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gunslingaaahhh.livejournal.com
I DONT HAVE THE PRESENCE OF MIND FOR THAT RIGHT NOW.

maybe ~later~ when im not exhausted.

Date: 2011-04-03 03:28 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] zolac-no-miko.livejournal.com
Weeeeeeelllll, okay then. *SIGH*

Date: 2011-04-03 03:30 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gunslingaaahhh.livejournal.com
i went on a truly epic hike today and ive been up for 12hrs; I CANT BE PERFECT ALL THE TIME OK.

that and if im gonna do this, im gonna do it RIGHT. that requires ~planning~ and ~tact~ and things im too sober to consider right now. <3

Date: 2011-04-03 04:22 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] zolac-no-miko.livejournal.com
True. We can't all be Batman. ...Epic hike, yay! Sounds awesome!

Fair enough. One does not venture lightly into Batman/H50 crossover fic. *nodnod*

Date: 2011-04-03 06:24 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gunslingaaahhh.livejournal.com
lmao batman = perfection

Date: 2011-04-01 01:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] twig-tea.livejournal.com
Yeah, what zolac said above. they're recorded in either mp3 or m4a format, so you can put them on your mp3 readers or your audiobook readers and listen to people read fics to you. I love them for the subway, and for working out! Much more mind-distracting than music. And sometimes for going to sleep to.

Date: 2011-04-01 09:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gunslingaaahhh.livejournal.com
ah, ok, cool! thanks so much =)

Date: 2011-04-01 05:35 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] aphelant.livejournal.com
God, I love the way you write these two. *___*

Date: 2011-04-01 07:27 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] viennajones.livejournal.com
This is awesome and gorgeous and brilliant, and that's not even surprising, because all of your writing is just that. aldkfj. ♥

Date: 2011-04-01 07:55 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sunsaralyn.livejournal.com
Very very pretty. The lyrical quality to some of this piece is so good. It just flows. And there's that bit about how Danny feels like his heart is going to burst but he can't explain it. That. Just that. ☼ ♥_____♥ ☼

Date: 2011-04-01 08:05 am (UTC)
laitaine: Picture of Danny from Hawaii Five-0. (h50 - danny - content)
From: [personal profile] laitaine
I like sundays a LOT. ♥ x a billion

Date: 2011-04-01 09:38 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kubis.livejournal.com
♥______ ♥

Date: 2011-04-01 10:00 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] zolac-no-miko.livejournal.com
Oh... oh that is just lovely.

I love the title, where is that from?

I love this: his fingers forge into the abandoned space, seeking fruitlessly.

And this: That's just the kind of guy Steve is, unfazed by all the things that make normal people crazy, wandering off the beaten path like no one ever taught him to follow a trail.

And this: Sometimes I love you so much it terrifies me, because you don't make any sense at all and you're clearly not sane and everything you do makes me wonder a little more what goes on in that head of yours, McGarrett, fuck.

And I love this: "What was wrong with the bed," he manages, feeling sleep tugging at him already. "Too comfortable, huh?"

"Sunrise," Steve says. "Appreciating the little moments, Danno, it's a thing people do."
- I love this, it's the only bit of proper dialogue in the piece, and there's so little of it, just a line apiece... and in one line apiece you somehow managed to capture them perfectly, that is exactly how they sound when they talk, how do you do this?

...My friend is visiting, and she's been reading H50 fic but hadn't actually seen any of the episodes. I am fixing this. Bwaha. ...We were watching episode two, and I can't remember what scene it was exactly, but we simultaneously rolled our eyes, tilted our heads toward each other, and intoned, "Married." ...I fucking love this show. XD

Date: 2011-04-01 12:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sheeplikeme.livejournal.com
I could be wrong but I'm fairly certain the title is from one of my favourite songs These Few Presidents by Why?

Date: 2011-04-01 08:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] zolac-no-miko.livejournal.com
Hey, thanks!

Date: 2011-04-01 10:43 am (UTC)
somehowunbroken: (5-0 Danno heart)
From: [personal profile] somehowunbroken
I love how you express Danny's thoughts.

Date: 2011-04-01 10:47 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sirona-gs.livejournal.com
*basks*

The love, and the warmth, and the fear, and the heartclench. Words fail me. I love the two of them, not wisely, but too well. Those two will be the death of me, I am more than sure. Sometimes it scares me how invested I am in this pairing, but I'm well beyond the point of no return by now. As long as there's you, and [livejournal.com profile] hermette, and all those wonderful, amazing writers out there, I know they'll get their happy ending!

Date: 2011-04-01 11:22 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dogeared.livejournal.com
ajashsjahajsfashdkdj oh I love this--beached Steve!--and Danny getting up just to appreciate him, ♥ ♥ ♥

Date: 2011-04-01 12:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com
This is so very lovely! All warm and fuzzy and happy. Thank you for brightening my morning. :D

Date: 2011-04-01 12:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sheeplikeme.livejournal.com
Reading this after waking up too early for a boxing class was kind of perfect. Though every time you mentioned Danno yawning, you made me yawn too.

So cute and also if the title is a Why? reference, you may be my new favourite person on the internets.

Now, to punch things.

Date: 2011-04-01 01:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] twig-tea.livejournal.com
aslfhasdfhsda SO WARM AND HALF-AWAKE AND ADORABLE. this fic is like a nap in sunshine ♥

Date: 2011-04-01 01:25 pm (UTC)
ext_310128: Sexual Deviant (Default)
From: [identity profile] photoclerk.livejournal.com
So peaceful and sweet. <3

Date: 2011-04-01 03:01 pm (UTC)
ext_3167: Happiness is a dragon in formaldehyde  (writing is...)
From: [identity profile] puckling.livejournal.com
"Morning," he says, instead of You big freak or What are you doing out here or Sometimes I love you so much it terrifies me, because you don't make any sense at all and you're clearly not sane and everything you do makes me wonder a little more what goes on in that head of yours, McGarrett, fuck. He rubs a hand against the back of his neck, yawns a third time, not bothering to cover it.

I love this paragraph with a firey burning passion.

Date: 2011-04-01 08:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jesseofthenorth.livejournal.com
Read this last night but I was too tired to comment lucidly lol.

I loved how peaceful this was. I am also quite enamored of there being a kind of magnetic pull between the two of them. If Steve isn't sleeping neither is Danny.
Very nicely done, thanks for this.
Edited Date: 2011-04-01 09:30 pm (UTC)

Date: 2011-04-02 01:57 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mobiuspitch.livejournal.com
I stumbled across one of your Inception fics a while back (So This is the New Year, I think) and I've been hooked ever since because the writing in all of your fics is beautiful.

Have you ever listened to Letters from the Sky by Civil Twilight? Every time I listen to that song I am reminded strongly of i'll see you when the sun sets east.

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