Mar. 16th, 2010

gyzym: (Shocked!Neal)
Title: Little Things
Rating: PG-13
Genre/Pairing: Neal/Kate. OT3, with some squinting.
Spoilers: For Out of the Box.
Warnings: Grief, crying. Exploding cantaloupes.
Author's Note: There's fic I should be working on and beta-ing I should be doing, but I woke up in the middle of the night with this in my head and had to write it.
Summary: Neal tries to think like a con man, like being sane is his cover.

The woman on the street in front of him and the way the streetlight highlights the curve of her neck bending forever under her hair--that stops him. )
gyzym: (Glasses!)
Alright. Some things before I start:

1) I am not, by any means, an expert on constructive criticism. What knowledge I do have comes from the fact that I am a creative writing student, and as such have been in a number of workshop classes. These classes exposed me to the views of several brilliant professors, and also to those of a number of other writers. Additionally, I was lucky enough to have one of those professors agree to work with me on the production of the novel I'm currently writing. Because of this, I have received A LOT of concrit. None of this makes me any kind of an expert; it just makes me comfortable with this topic.

2) I am also not, by ANY means, attempting to cause wank. This is not my super sekkrit way of calling someone out--I don't play those games in real life, and I see no reason to play them over the interwebs. I am writing this post because this topic has come up a lot over the past few weeks. I've heard from writers who've received concrit (or NOT concrit) and have wanted to know how to handle it; I've heard from readers who want to offer concrit, but are afraid to. I myself have received some concrit from readers who have been massively apologetic about offering it, and it finally occurred to me that I've never seen a post that really delves into it. THAT IS ALL I AM TRYING TO DO. please do not be mad at me :D

OKAY. All that being said, here we go:

Constructive Criticism: A Primer )

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