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Or, Jizzy was almost asleep, couldn't find her phone, looked everywhere, panicked that she lost it, woke herself all the way up, found it tangled in the blankets, and then used it to write a ficlet about Danny and Steve to wind herself back down.



Steve's a sprawling sleeper, used to catching it where he can get it; he's crashed in corners and cargo bins, in and out of combat zones. He takes up space in beds because he can, throwing an arm across a nearby pillow and streching his legs, and wakes the same way, like he hasn't moved at all. It's a luxury, like hot water and cold beer, like friendship without a timestamp, and he uses it, abuses it, because it's there.

Danny, who likes rules and order, who talks about being civilized like there's some book on it he's studied, has a side of the bed. Steve doesn't know why he's suprised--Danny's got an opinion, a side, on everything he touches, and bedspace is no different. He digs in, Danny does, sleeps like he's angry about it, steals blankets to burrow around himself and wakes up too warm in the Hawaiian heat. He curls into Steve, on his side, on his stomach, wraps his fingers around his arm and holds on. And he moves, moves all night, little shifts that startle Steve at first, pull him upright, panting, in the unthreatened darkness of his home.

"Jeez," Danny slurs, words thick, awake by proxy, "high strung, fuck's sake, c'mon," and Steve goes.

But the thing is that Steve gets used to Danny, he adapts, and after a few months there's this rutted canyon in his mattress, like Danny's slept so hard he left a bruise. Steve kisses him, light against his shoulder, til he groans and rolls; he blinks, once, twice, like he's awakened to a world he doesn't quite understand.

"Patience, babe," he says, "too hard for you, huh," but he leans close anyway, like he can't help himself. Steve rests a hand on his back, the other in the dip of the mattress he's left behind, and closes his eyes to the sun.

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Date: 2011-03-15 07:03 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gunslingaaahhh.livejournal.com
He digs in, Danny does, sleeps like he's angry about it

and

Danny's slept so hard he left a bruise

are great lines. i sleep rough, i sleep hard so i know aaaaaaaallllll about it.

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Date: 2011-03-15 07:28 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] viennajones.livejournal.com
I AM DELIGHTED! SADJKLASJDK
It's a luxury, like hot water and cold beer, like friendship without a timestamp, and he uses it, abuses it, because it's there. So Steve!
And then Danny. See, you gave me hearteyes >>> ♥____♥

Date: 2011-03-15 03:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gyzym.livejournal.com
Hearteyes right back atcha, love :D

Date: 2011-03-15 07:37 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] seeingrightly.livejournal.com
sleeps like he's angry about it & like Danny's slept so hard he left a bruise

hearts forever and ever

Date: 2011-03-15 03:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gyzym.livejournal.com
♥ ♥ ♥

Date: 2011-03-15 07:37 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fic-kitty.livejournal.com
"sleeps like he's angry about it".

I love this little mental picture of Danny, smooshing his face into the pillow with little frown lines in between his eyebrows :D

Date: 2011-03-15 03:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gyzym.livejournal.com
Thanks so much! Glad you enjoyed :D

Date: 2011-03-15 07:58 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gehirnstuerm.livejournal.com
Danny's got an opinion, a side, on everything he touches, and bedspace is no different. He digs in, Danny does, sleeps like he's angry about it, steals blankets to burrow around himself and wakes up too warm in the Hawaiian heat.

Oh DANNY! ♥___♥

Date: 2011-03-15 03:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gyzym.livejournal.com
He is just so himself all the time :D Thanks so much for reading!

Date: 2011-03-15 08:24 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mad-musing.livejournal.com
*flails*

It's a luxury, like hot water and cold beer, like friendship without a timestamp, and he uses it, abuses it, because it's there.

That just about did me in. It's so beautiful but so sad all at once.

The idea of "friendship without a timestamp". Oh, Steve, honey, that shouldn't be a luxury.

Or THIS: He curls into Steve, on his side, on his stomach, wraps his fingers around his arm and holds on. This this this. Goodness gracious. I grinned so hard I almost disappeared behind it, like the fucking Cheshire Cat.

♥ in my eyes FOREVER.

Date: 2011-03-15 03:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gyzym.livejournal.com
I am grinning like the Cheshire Cat from this comment, bb, not gonna lie :D Thank you!

Date: 2011-03-15 08:57 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bluespirit-star.livejournal.com
Danny's got an opinion, a side, on everything he touches, and bedspace is no different.

This feels so true that it should be canon.

Gorgeous little ficlet. ♥
Thanks. :)

Date: 2011-03-15 03:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gyzym.livejournal.com
Thank *you* for the lovely comment ♥

Date: 2011-03-15 09:28 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] lamardeuse.livejournal.com
Oh, wow. Love this little gem.

Date: 2011-03-15 03:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gyzym.livejournal.com
Thanks, bb! ♥

Date: 2011-03-15 11:01 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] zolac-no-miko.livejournal.com
Awww, this is so... so pretty. Just... gorgeous. Guh.

Date: 2011-03-15 03:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gyzym.livejournal.com
♥ ♥ ♥

Date: 2011-03-15 11:03 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sirona-gs.livejournal.com
I am totally Steve in this scenario; I sprawl like nobody's business when I sleep. I would love to have an angry lump to curl up around, though! God, the way these two fit each other, I can't even. They are meant to be together, anyone who says differently is a big fat liar. <333

Date: 2011-03-15 03:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gyzym.livejournal.com
I JUST HAVE A LOT OF FEELINGS ABOUT THEM. Loving ones. Tin-hatty, loving ones.

Thanks for reading, bb :D

Date: 2011-03-15 11:08 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ashism.livejournal.com
Love this.

Date: 2011-03-15 03:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gyzym.livejournal.com
Thank you!

Date: 2011-03-15 11:22 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kubis.livejournal.com
♥____♥

ALL OF IT.

Date: 2011-03-15 03:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gyzym.livejournal.com
♥ ♥ ♥

Date: 2011-03-15 11:41 am (UTC)
ext_8753: (Default)
From: [identity profile] vickita.livejournal.com
Yeah, every word of that is just..... *correct*. This is them.

Date: 2011-03-15 03:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gyzym.livejournal.com
Eep, thank you so much!

Date: 2011-03-15 12:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dogeared.livejournal.com
a;fadslfas;dfkj oh this is so beautiful, and I love this and everything it says about them, apart and together (and He curls into Steve, on his side, on his stomach, wraps his fingers around his arm and holds on, sdf;adsflskjf) ♥!

Date: 2011-03-15 03:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gyzym.livejournal.com
Oh, man, thank you so much, I'm so glad you liked this :D :D :D

Date: 2011-03-15 01:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hermette.livejournal.com
after a few months there's this rutted canyon in his mattress, like Danny's slept so hard he left a bruise

♥_♥

Your fucking words. I do not understand.

Date: 2011-03-15 03:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gyzym.livejournal.com
♥ ♥ ♥ forever, bb :D

Date: 2011-03-15 01:22 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] siria
Oh, oh, this is so lovely! ♥ Boys!

Date: 2011-03-15 03:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gyzym.livejournal.com
Eeep, thank you so much!

Date: 2011-03-15 01:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sheafrotherdon.livejournal.com
askdjhflkasdhf oh, oh, oh, I love this so much! I love the image of Danny sleeping like he's angry about it, bless his heart! and mmmmph so delicious, oh, I could read stories about them asleep FOREVER.

Date: 2011-03-15 03:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gyzym.livejournal.com
:D I will just...keep writing this exhaustion story then...fdjfhdskf oh, brain, why can't I quit you.

Thanks so much, bb! So glad you liked this ♥

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Date: 2011-03-15 01:58 pm (UTC)
ext_230: a tiny green frog on a very red leaf (Default)
From: [identity profile] anatsuno.livejournal.com
Oh, oh, you are so damn good with words. So lovely, so clear. <3

Date: 2011-03-15 03:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gyzym.livejournal.com
Thanks so much, love ♥

Date: 2011-03-15 02:37 pm (UTC)
ext_310128: Sexual Deviant (Default)
From: [identity profile] photoclerk.livejournal.com
*__*
YOU BETTER NEVER LET ME NEAR THAT PHONE. I WILL HIDE IT AND HAVE IT MAGICALLY APPEAR *ALL THE TIME*

Date: 2011-03-15 03:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gyzym.livejournal.com
NOOOOOOOO, THAT WAS A DREADFUL MOMENT FOR ME LAST NIGHT! Even though logically I *knew* it had come home with me, so the whole thing was fdjfhdskf irrational.

ANYWAY I'M GLAD YOU LIKED THIS DON'T STEAL MY PHONE :D

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Date: 2011-03-15 02:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] h0bbitx3.livejournal.com
Awe adorable! ♥

Date: 2011-03-15 03:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gyzym.livejournal.com
Thanks :D

Date: 2011-03-15 03:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gottalovev.livejournal.com
wow, this is wonderful. I love every word of it ♥

Date: 2011-03-15 03:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gyzym.livejournal.com
Thank you so much! So glad you enjoyed it ♥

Date: 2011-03-15 03:17 pm (UTC)
ext_3167: Happiness is a dragon in formaldehyde  (Default)
From: [identity profile] puckling.livejournal.com
Steve rests a hand on his back, the other in the dip of the mattress he's left behind, and closes his eyes to the sun.

Lovely.

Date: 2011-03-15 03:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gyzym.livejournal.com
Thank you ♥

Date: 2011-03-15 03:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] perspi.livejournal.com
THAT IS SO PERFECT THANK YOU *flails*

Date: 2011-03-15 04:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] belle-favrielle.livejournal.com
Oh my god, they are precious babies.

Date: 2011-03-15 06:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] missimae2u.livejournal.com
utterly wonderful......this was eeeep! so very them.....

in my attempt to not keysmash or ramble incoherently i will just say luv'd this it was great....
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